tiredThose of native fluency will (hopefully) note that it is less full of errors than previous entries. This is not because I did not make those errors (oh, I did), it's because a native-speaker I am acquainted with helped me figure out how to write certain things, and generally offered corrections. Of course, any remaining errors are mine alone -- there are probably some left and/or (re-)introduced, but I shall see those soon enough when the 作文 are returned.
Otherwise, it's not a very interesting paper.
私の趣味
ひまな時、私はカラオケを歌ったり、レゴを集めたり、旅行をしたり、ハイキングをしま
十年前にコロラドに引っこした時、コロラドの景色が大好きになったので、写真を撮り始
色々な写真を撮るのが好きですが、きれいな景色が一番好きです。時々動物園へ行って動
写真を撮るのが楽しいです。よくない写真を撮ることもありますが、いい写真が撮れた時
